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As your read this essay, you are probably wondering as to why I would be writing an optional response question. Its simple, in order for Indiana University to get a good understanding of the type of person I am, aside from the high school transcript, SAT or ACT ....

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.... to help school morale. Not only will I be receiving a four year education in the major of my childhood dreams, but it would give me a chance to attend a prestigious university. When asking the majority of my friends what colleges they are applying to, I get the response of UMASS, Michigan, Wisconsin, etc.… In return, I give them my answer of "I want to attend Indiana University. Praying that I will receive an acceptance letter by the end of the millennium, and attending college in Indiana in the fall of 2000." Coming down Great Neck Ave. is the Indiana University Admissions office. Holding my dreams and aspirations at your fingertips, I ....