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Living in the British Properties is a pain! Is only one of three reasons why I need a car. I need a car because I live at the top of the British Properties, I'm getting a job, and I have friends in different cities. Living in the British Properties is annoying ....

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.... to what I have to say. Even when the buses come they are always late because the routes are convoluted. It takes hours to get anywhere. The closest commercial area to my house is Park Royal and that is a two hour walk away. There are no small stores and if I want milk, the closest store is in North Vancouver, would you believe. I guess they expect everyone to be so rich, so they can afford a car for every member in the family (think again). Waiting for the buses in the freezing rain or snow is so annoying. If I just had a car, I could jump into my it and drive to Park Royal in a fraction of the time. I wouldn't have to wait for buses anymore ....